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Hey everyone, I bet everyone is stressed out with admission being right around the corner (me too dw), but I just had some questions about the essay. Does anyone have any tips? Is it cliche to do a story on your childhood if it links back to why you want to do that degree plan? Also, is it better to do a College Application submission or a direct application? What is everyone writing their essays on?

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Hey! You鈥檙e definitely not alone鈥攁dmissions season has everyone feeling the pressure, and it鈥檚 great that you鈥檙e thinking ahead. When it comes to the essay, the best tip is to be authentic. Admissions officers read thousands of essays, so yours will stand out if it鈥檚 personal, reflective, and shows growth. Start with a strong hook鈥攎aybe a vivid anecdote or a moment of realization鈥攁nd make sure to connect your story to your academic goals. As for writing about your childhood, it鈥檚 not necessarily clich茅 if it鈥檚 done well. If the story is specific, meaningful, and clearly ties into why you鈥檙e pursuing that degree plan, it can be powerful. Just avoid vague statements like 鈥淚鈥檝e always loved science鈥 and instead focus on a moment that shaped your passion. Regarding the application method, the College Application (like Common App) is great if you鈥檙e applying to multiple schools鈥攊t streamlines the process and lets you reuse your main essay. Direct applications can be more tailored but often require more work. Check each school鈥檚 preferences to decide. As for essay topics, people write about everything from personal challenges and cultural identity to quirky hobbies and career inspirations. The key is to choose something that reveals who you are beyond your grades and test scores. If you鈥檙e still deciding on a topic, I鈥檇 be happy to help you brainstorm or give feedback on a draft. You鈥檝e got this!

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a year ago[edited]

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This is absolutely the response. Clich茅s exist for a reason, after all. If you can be specific, paint a scene, and make the admissions officer feel something in your essay, then go for it! Admissions officers can sometimes lose interest very quickly with well-trodden topics, so make sure to catch their attention quickly! Good luck!

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馃帐a year ago

Thank you so much! Your response was so detailed and is so helpful!! Thank you again!!

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馃帐a year ago

Thank you!!!

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3 months ago

A childhood story isn鈥檛 automatically clich茅 honestly. It mostly depends on how personal/specific it feels and whether it actually says something meaningful about you now, not just 鈥渢his happened when I was 8.鈥 If it connects naturally to your degree choice and growth, it can work really well.

Biggest tip I got was: focus less on sounding impressive and more on sounding real. Admissions people read thousands of essays and can usually tell when someone is forcing it.

As for Common App vs direct application, I鈥檇 just use whatever is easier unless a school specifically prefers one. Common App saves a ton of time if you鈥檙e applying to multiple places.

And trust me, everyone is stressed right now lol. You鈥檙e definitely not alone there.

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